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Weep Willow
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Weep Willow |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Weep willow weep For all that is And never was For all dreams lost For what once Was everything Now to high A cost Weep Weep willow weep Into the wind Let others gaze Upon your beauty To shallow to See your pain I will sit Until your finished And wash away Tear stains |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nice Connie, the willow symbolizes so much...and so many feelings....Perhaps the name weeping willow is oh so very much appropriate..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Connie, this whispered very well today...thank you for this gift... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This was very enjoyable, nice writing and the weeping willow is such a symbolic tree. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Connie, I have always found the weeping willow to be so symbolic too, I always see it representing youth and how we may suffer but in the end, when we turn to Him and grow rich in love, the sunshine will come and we'll weep in joy! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ You breeze the willow branches beautifully~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Loved yr melancholy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zinsser Delicious, enjoyed the read. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done - enjoyed this write about one of my favourite trees. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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