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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-08-17 12:20 PM

Silent Heart Oblivion

I long for the words
Instead they fade away
Empty heart shrouded
Blanketed in dismay

Silent heart oblivion
No one sees yearning
When holding my pen
Tossing and turning

Heartache rivulets
Tears flowing through
My lonely heart cries
Immersed into blue

Yearning each day
Wishing I could write
Embracing my muse
Where hearts unite

Absent are words
Submerged by ache
Is there a given time
To end heartbreak

Hope ©2002

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-17 12:23 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Hope, I believe we all have days like this you are not alone and as always your words are always so beautiful and filled with gorgeous rhymes and your own special voice! (kiss on cheek) Always follow your heart in what you write, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-18 12:05 PM

a good read again, especially that grabbing, gripping last stanza!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-08-18 12:25 PM

Hope~
Such a poignant penning~
Good to see you, poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-08-18 01:04 PM

Hope, I think the silence is one of the worst things...I'd rather see or hear anything but silence

M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-08-18 03:23 PM

HopeS,
Well done you are a talented poet.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-08-23 06:00 AM

Hope-
You've expressed this well.
Hugs to you, my friend.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-23-2002 06:02 AM).]

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

7 posted 2002-08-23 10:59 AM

Very well expressed.I like it.

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