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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Entangled There is a place, they say, so envision with me, if you will a center in your mind, a cross section that brings one to the middle somewhere floating behind your eyes if you center, center yourself to that pinpoint and feather lightly light thoughts they say, they say... desire begins there, and the quivering lingers... I will never know if a man might experience that pleasure but... but if you should close your eyes, if you would pretend with me, that the feather light I imagine is the dark strange shadow of you stroking, just there, along the grain of line within my mind where all is centered where all shivers in delicious dark light and the well is plumbed where the waters meet then, then, you would know this feeling Assuredly, this spot exists... and I would take you there with me... for I have not yet lost myself in this feeling, it is so overwhelming that I would fear to be alone, wanting one with me one who understood, one who would hold me while I explored those inner places, and join me there... but in the nights when you have slipped in alongside me I tremble about the edges of it... with you knowing that it would be a blessed event to have you along side for that particular adventure... I think it is a particularly enticing place, where the resonance would sound in echo where the wind would touch the soul. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I think it is a particularly enticing place, where the resonance would sound in echo where the wind would touch the soul."   (big hugggssssss) Oh Elan, I believe we all are familiar with this kind of place as it is important to feel accepted or loved in some way and to find that solace that we yearn for in the night! (sigh) This is powerfully heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I think it is a particularly enticing place, where the resonance would sound in echo where the wind would touch the soul." ------------------------- Yes Elan, there does exist such a place... a place where you should go with another.. Perhaps you will...perhaps...in time. For I have been there...and I know This is beautiful sweet poetess. ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Elan - a'hhhh, and the desire does begin there... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Somewhere between there and then between a place of warm flowing springs of thought. Lies this existance that a man has... to share, to give, to allow to be felt as one becomes known by one... Such a place exists only in the recesses of a mind flooded with love's desire from the well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but if you should close your eyes, if you would pretend with me, that the feather light I imagine is the dark strange shadow of you stroking, just there, along the grain of line within my mind where all is centered where all shivers in delicious dark light and the well is plumbed where the waters meet ===================================== I think it is a particularly enticing place, where the resonance would sound in echo where the wind would touch the soul. ==================================== my oh my oh my oh my .... *Sigh* (IWIHWT)  If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Ms. E., Such a beautiful expression of emotional, spiritual, and physical intimacy. I hope that you meet with this...soon! Shenachie |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
where the wind would touch the soul... and so did your poem!!! It touched my soul deeply!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elan I have to go along with OH MY, OH MY, sigh. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Elan You have described the center of the heart, the seat of the soul, the core of energy..a place guarded well. So beautiful and delicate is the walk around you show us in this poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm impressed with this one! Like it alot! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Elan this is awesome, great write, loved the flow and imagery, well done. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
where the wind would touch the soul. Elan, this is exquisite writing and yeppers, I know this place exists and we find it in love. Well done. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a gorgeous write, Elan... You have nearly hypnotized me with it... I just keep focusing on that little spot... Now I have to come out of that lovely trance you put me in.  ~ hugs from hypnotized chipmunkLyra |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Like just about everyone, these lines... where the resonance would sound in echo where the wind would touch the soul. Awesome. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
the center of you of no doubt an hallowed place where the soul is touched Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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FLScarlet Junior Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 16 |
Wonderful thoughts.. and, excellent writing. Thanks for sharing it with all of us. |
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