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han_tigger
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Thunder.

Thunder in the sky.
The rain begins to fall,
From far above in heavens,
From where the sunshine falls.
It begins to beat,
As my pulse does in the night.
Then the thunder strikes,
Like a dagger from the sky.
The lightening cutting through the darkness,
Like a spear through my heart.
The crash of rocks by giants,
Playing in the sky.
The gods throwing arrows,
Arrows of shocking light,
Cutting through the moonlit scene.
Some strike right upon our earth,
In fear we run away,
From these terrifying sights.
© Copyright 2002 Hannah Inglis - All Rights Reserved
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Oh my, yes!  I like to watch the thunder and lightning about 8 feet back from the picture window, with all the lights off. Then it can be awesome....out there, NOT in here!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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(smiles) Oh Hannah, I just love thunder, I have always depicted it as God's destined rage, a promise that all of the greed of Earth will be avenged with love and virtue! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hannah, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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One of those awesome displays
really leaves you feeling
insignificant and helpless...
and inspired!
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Hannah~
Imagery-laden~
You made the lightning dance and the thunder resound~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Very much enjoyed Hannah...
Well done!
~Hugs~

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  So you won't ever forget me ~

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Good imagery of a common event.  It left an impression.
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