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Open Poetry #22

Touch

han_tigger
Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 50
Thundersley, Essex, Uk

0 posted 2002-08-16 03:56 PM

Touch.

What would the world be,
If you could not feel the soft breeze,
Brush the soft grasses on your palms,
If you cannot touch a soft flower,
Feel the warm sunrays upon your face,
Feel the sand between your toes,
And the softness of fallen leaves,
To feel the cold snow on your fingertips,
And the warlmth of a crakerling fire,
What would the world be,
If we could not apprecicate these things.

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

1 posted 2002-08-16 04:12 PM

Alas, the world would be a hopeless void of carbon monoxide and dirty streets where people worship only the almighty dollar...

Great work.

[This message has been edited by Gabriel Frost (08-16-2002 04:13 PM).]

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2002-08-17 06:43 PM

No, the world would be a very dull place. I can't imagine losing the sense of touch.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-08-17 07:02 PM

It would be a place bereft of sense.

Good poem
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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