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Our journey
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Our journey |
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han_tigger Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 50Thundersley, Essex, Uk |
Our journey. We walk on forever, Looking down at our worn feet, For we have travelled so far, Our journey long, We cannot stop now, or never will we begin again, We have our goal, our hope, The light we long for in the mist. We give each other strength, We pull each other along, In unity we find our power. A smear on our clothes, A worn face, Our tired feet, show our distant travels. We hear a whistle on the wind, Announcing our arrival, We can see our hope at last, We tried so hard, We wished so many times, And now our dream is true. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is a lovely stroll Hannah.. *s M |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely I especially like: "the light we long for in the mist" Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
han_tigger Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Hannah, this is so lovely, sweet friend, and may all your wishes come true and may you live happily ever after, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hannah, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Hannah...enjoyed very much! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for taking us along on your little journey, Hannah I enjoyed it.  ~ hugs from my underground burrowLyra |
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