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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-16 03:25 PM


“OF A LOVING DESIRE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Both are of broken hearts,
healing, yet they are open,
meeting for the first time,
desiring only of affection…

Sensitive words are spoken,
not heard for many years,
tender are the heartfelt cries,
from souls within, it appears…

When the weeping flows inside,
it’s from the poignant being,
which rids it self of emptiness,
to disappear, with the aching…

Then two of a loving desire,
with wants not being elusive,
come together into an embrace,
sharing, to once again live…
~~~~

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (08-16-2002 09:37 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2002-08-16 03:50 PM


Beautiful words BC,  BTW....do you ever take
your shades off?

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2002-08-16 03:55 PM


Barry - thank you for the reply, and yes, I do take off the shades. I'll have to post another photo without them...

BC

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3 posted 2002-08-16 04:07 PM


Soft and lovely Bill - enjoyed. Chris

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4 posted 2002-08-16 07:14 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Bill, this is excellent, I love it, I know this heartaching feeling and I believe tikme will always make amends and love will find a way! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-16 07:58 PM


Very soft...very romantic Bill...
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2002-08-16 09:19 PM


Oh BC, this was so beautiful. I love the last stanza...

' ... Then two of a loving desire,
with wants not being elusive,
come together into an embrace,
sharing, to again feel alive… '

Fabulous ~~ Hugs, Marti

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7 posted 2002-08-16 09:22 PM



We are so very glad
you have come back to share your words...

passing shadows
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8 posted 2002-09-02 09:10 AM


beautiful...and I can't wait for the photo without the shades  

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (09-02-2002 09:11 AM).]

vandana
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9 posted 2002-09-02 04:35 PM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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10 posted 2002-09-02 05:42 PM


BC--I think Magnus likes more than just your poetry! LOL

This poem, what can I say?---Expresses what many of us have experienced at least once in our lives.

Linda


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11 posted 2002-09-02 06:19 PM


Just how a meeting should be
Sandra

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12 posted 2002-09-02 06:20 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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