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Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2002-08-16 02:08 PM

Queen of the Mere

The argent nightsurrounded moon
full, in the heyday of its noon
sate like a union in a pouch,
glanced like a lady from her couch,
surveying with a kenny eye
winds and moods- the soul of the sky.
No clouds intruded on her gaze
no folds of night disturbed her phase
like Cleopatra in warm milk
or in a gown of luscious silk
thus did she bathe in summer air
and luxuries of heaven's care.
Soon, looked evenlong to a mere
whose glassy face a grace did rear.
From off its sandy verge, with pride
in regal plumes to swiftly glide,
the remeant Queen filled her sight
then like a dream on wings, took flight.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (08-16-2002 02:10 PM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-08-16 02:10 PM

Essorant, I am enjoying this!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-08-16 03:27 PM

The argent nightsurrounded moon
full, in the heyday of its noon
sate like a union in a pouch,
glanced like a lady from her couch,
surveying with a kenny eye
winds and moods- the soul of the sky.
No clouds intruded on her gaze
no folds of night disturbed her phase
like Cleopatra in warm milk
or in a gown of luscious silk
thus did she bathe in summer air
and luxuries of heaven's care.
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This is a lovely offering of imagery and cadence...ethereal rhymes divine.
Welcome to Passions...nice to meet you poet Essorant.

If all the tear drops went to heaven
And if all the pain was confined ...
Would I be your salvation
could I make your spirit shine.

KWSB

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

3 posted 2002-08-16 03:56 PM

Well done.
Now i'm all smiley!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2002-08-16 04:32 PM

Wow!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-08-16 04:35 PM

I echo Tier's "WOW"!!!

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-08-16 04:44 PM

This has a beautiful flow, and the images are glorious.
Welcome to passions.
Sandra

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-16 07:19 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, oh my gosh, this is soooooo magical, I love it! (sigh) You always bring such magic and romantic beauty to these pages, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Essorant, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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