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JediRaver
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since 2002-08-16
Posts 23
ATL, GA, USA

0 posted 2002-08-16 01:55 PM



Gliding my fingers
through the currents of your hair
brings elation to my face...
The smiles
that pour out of me
shall bring my blood to bare
the pulsing of my heart to you
as my thoughts begin to race.
Your eyes shine out to me
brilliant in the night
starbursts of emotion
our love a fortress
strong and true
I can seek no other joy
than happiness with you!

Carressing the mountains
valleys of your skin
circumnavigate your shoulders
in rhythmic ellipses
while I hold you close to me.
My senses are awakened
by the power of your touch;
become alive and dream.
Your lips quiver
dancing in the dusk
my love for you
a temple...tranquil and serene
Tucked so far away from view.
I will trek a thousand miles
for happiness with you!

Connecting with your soul
so precious as a gift
bestowed upon my gladdened heart
to nurture love
and cherish you
as an artisan whose vision
never fades away or falls apart.
My feelings
mesmerized by your soft and gentle kiss
massaging my very inner core
as you revolve
upon the oceans of my mind
or like Eternal Spring...
our love forever will renew...
invincible...
sharing happiness with you!

-JediRaver

© Copyright 2002 Ryan Flanagan - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-08-16 01:59 PM



Welcome to Passions!  I see you bring the light of truth with your feelings into your poetry!  I think you're going to like it here.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-08-16 02:05 PM


Welcome To Passions!
Much enjoyed your first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~


~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (08-16-2002 02:06 PM).]

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2002-08-16 03:44 PM


Carressing the mountains
valleys of your skin
circumnavigate your shoulders
in rhythmic ellipses
while I hold you close to me.
My senses are awakened
by the power of your touch;
become alive and dream.
Your lips quiver
dancing in the dusk
my love for you
a temple...tranquil and serene
==================================

Happiness Indeed...someone inspires lovely things in your pen...this is a wonderful poetic dedication. Your phrasing and vocab added to its imagery brush stroked pleasures.
Well done...welcome to Poetry Land..so nice to meet you.

If all the tear drops went to heaven
And if all the pain was confined ...
Would I be your salvation
could I make your spirit shine.

KWSB

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-08-16 06:57 PM




Yay!!! Oh Ryan, this is a beautiful and romantic debut, I love it, I wish for happiness to always be with the both of you, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ryan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-08-16 07:02 PM


JediRaver
Welcome and I enjoyed your write.

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