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Magician
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0 posted 2002-08-16 01:19 PM


Looking up,
Reach for the cross
It fades away
Another loss
Leaves blood stains
The color red
I sink into
Fills my head
Pierces through
Here it comes again
With voices haunt
Cannot win
What cannot want
Grip tightens
Dry cracked throat
As air lightens
And here I float
Watching change
All that’s left me
Feeling strange
Ripped parts of me
More human somehow
I sense the death
Of here and now
By mortal breath
Escaping down,
By design or whim
I am lost in convolution
Sink or swim
Follow final solution

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1 posted 2002-08-16 01:24 PM


What a display of compassion for what
He could have possibly thought during
His time upon the cross.  This, in particular,

quote:
Ripped parts of me
More human somehow
I sense the death
Of here and now
By mortal breath
Escaping down,



leaves me thinking how carefully he had to tread both worlds...

Excellent piece, Magician!

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2 posted 2002-08-16 01:28 PM


You have amazing talent poet sir.
Extremely well done...and much enjoyed by this reader.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-08-16 07:04 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Magician, this is excellent, your words always go on pursuit with such a tender voice and such wonderful imagery! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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