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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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When I hear that honey song smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought I hear myself sleep talk loud wanting to be the other end of always touching Wanting to be the bottomless end of your private ocean Endlessly flowing like the emotions of a favorite movie rolling through ~The end~ of me
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool told tale o yuh sens you all as all ways yuh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
warm sensations here, Reg... and good vibrations... lots of sound in this one... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina.. other ends wanting to be other ends..your inspire is glazed in prime babe. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful and sure is one of my favorite movies of yours, this is an intimate classic, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Rwood, Lovely thoughts written. A pleasure to read. Essorant |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Regina....you always leave me speechless.. and starning at the screen shaking my head, thinking 'How does she do this?!' Amazing writing...just amazing. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
My favorite lines... I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can't get those lines out of my head, I wish I wrote that. j/k Very interesting ideas in here. I feel like writing something now. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Lovely portrayal of thoughts and emotion. I just love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rwood When I read your sound and fury It makes me feel a jury. Lovely  |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Very Beautiful...enjoyed very much. DeaDiAmore |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me deep in you I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought ============================== wanting to be the other end of always touching Wanting to be the bottomless end of your private ocean ================================== smoke into my sensitive now how cool and sensual is that line  the yearn and burn of it all is well felt in this emotively lovely piece Reg... does this kind of inspire come in a bottle? I need me some muse infusion If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never disappointing...always truly awesome...  to the top again! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Reg, I think with you there is no end, just a complete circle neverending. Well done m'girl. Hugs. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
the dearest lines… When I hear that honey song smoke into my sensitive I feel like there is an end of me ~ When the day is completely swollen ~ and I am more than a final thought ~ your private ocean ~ rolling through ~The end~ of me ~ a longing, but not of desperation… a healthy kind of hunger. this aches, regina, and rolls out like waves, lingering… lovely. [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Cor (08-20-2002 06:17 AM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You always write with such vivid visuals, Reg... I am now visualizing a pregnant day... I totally enjoyed.  ~ vivid chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You caused me to smile with this one as it brought back a memory for me of a ache I used to carry with me all day until I saw his face. Regina, as usual this was totally exquisite writing. My favorite ... "And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought" |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh this is truly lovely. Awesome writing. Enjoyed it so much. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derfully done! I love it |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very very cool and special, Regina !! mycafe Keep counting your blessings [This message has been edited by mycafe (08-21-2002 02:41 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, If this talent rubs off...I'd like to get real close to you! I looked in the dictionary and your picture was next to the word "sensual". I need say no more. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought Damn, this is good. Very good! ...more than a final thought. Damn! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That one made me breath catch, and I still can't get it back. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man-oh-man, your words simply amaze me. Enjoyed this very much. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can, but echo the above comments. All of them. ~wranx In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
There's only one word that can describe this. Passion. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! This is so totally cool. I love your emotional imagery. "I can see me there leaning back into the beginning of intimacy When the day is completely swollen And you aren't a haze any longer and I am more than a final thought" WOW! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You rock! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Reg, I gotta play it again, one more time. Miss you and hope all is well. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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