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Could Lifelessness?
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Could Lifelessness? |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Could you feel me If I wasn’t here No longer in this World we know Would our love Transcend boundaries Until now unbreakable Love eternal Twisting branches Becoming one Planted seeds Growing roots Forever planted In our hearts Our souls Could lifelessness Break this bond Bound by the Supernatural Forever already known In an instant of your gaze For all eternity I’ll lay a quiver Remembering Our love filled days |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
If I could touch spirit Could I bear it Would Electricity Of your being The freeing Of all you are Shock me If I couldn’t See you Would it mean I couldn’t Feel you But Always I would Remember you Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Connie, Gloom responded so beautifully to your poem, all I can say is how lovely both poems are. *s M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sir Gloom..... what beautiful words you responded with.... back at you... : ) Maureen: Thank You so very much |
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