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Through The Night
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Through The Night |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Through The Night Sleep through the calm of night Walking in the dreaming time toward day Follow the flow of nights silver river Through the path of stars sigh Into the night of soft dream Touch the silken sigh Caress in mind the dark desire While you wander through the night Sleep through the deep of night Floating on pillows of whispered wishes Thoughts of what might be, could be If only this or that Bolstered by the words of heart Heard and felt through the soul Slumber on while the magic Weaves its path through the night Sleep through the silent of night Carried on the breath of hopes dream The desires that you hope to feel The trace of heat that lingers on To spiral through your soul And pool in wants and needs As you lie wishing for more Somewhere in the deep of night Sleep through the quiet of the night To rise again in the dawn of shining day Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, this is so soft, with undertones of dreaming. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krissy - I agree, this is a very soft read... BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Krissy darling daughter mine and what do you call this little effort then Hmmm? What do you call these words that trickle down the page in dreamy haze. I know you were bored so you thought you’d give it a go Mmmm, a likely story. Well, I suppose I could say that it’s okay darling, but you know me and your free verse. I’ll believe Keth when she says it’s soft and dreamy, and simply say ditto darling. I’m sure it is wonderful love, and what is even more so is you now have your own Internet connection and so don’t have to clog up my computer time. Now THAT makes me as happy as a grig. Speak to you later darling, love you always xxxx   Love you cabbages Mum  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Krissy, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it, yes, always rise to the dawn and believe the new day holds so much hope and promise! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krissy~ Ahhh .... 'The desires that you hope to feel The trace of heat that lingers on To spiral through your soul And pool in wants and needs As you lie wishing for more' Ooooohhhhh, me lika this sooooooo much~ You romanticize sooooo beautifully poetess~ Lovely ... lovely ... lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
silently and softly romantic, like breathing a kiss there, the thief steals summer warmth and covers the chill of night with a blanket of his love Absolutely and utterly utterly (apologies to all cattle) delightful, insightful, divine, sublime and sensually lovely! Don't spend all those kisses in one place, KrissyGal! jeff |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Krissy....don't tell your Mum that I think this is a very awesome poem.....(She knows it is).....excellent write.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Slumber on while the magic Weaves its path through the night" Beautifully written Krissy! You have such wonderful phrasing throughout this piece ... soft and tranquil, to fit the mood ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, With this poem as a pillow for my head I shall have sweet dreams tonight. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautifully penned Krissy and I hope all your dreams come true. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My covers (and my cats *G*) are probably wishing I'd have such a night... so that they wouldn't end up twisted and/or knocked onto the floor. *G* I like this, Krissy... the gentle tone is perfect. *S* |
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