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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-08-16 08:58 AM

Lady In Red
~*~
The crisp clear frosty morn
sparkles the cool of Autumn flames
steaming from the night before
sunshine kindles
her.
And like the winged spindle tree
that flaunts her glory,
crisp snap of the her crimson leaves
cannot be crushed
like red velvet
no one can tame a lady in red

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (08-16-2002 11:16 AM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-08-16 09:04 AM

Oh Deb...this is SO beautiful..
But, as much as I love Autumn,
I don't want summer to be over just yet.
Beautiful write...just beautiful.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Magician
Member

since 2002-08-14

Posts 126

2 posted 2002-08-16 09:04 AM

And like the winged spindle tree
that flaunts her glory,

Thats some beautiful imagery here.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-08-16 01:08 PM

BloomingRose - free is the Lady In Red...

BC

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

4 posted 2002-08-16 01:13 PM

BloomingRose---Beautiful image. Nicely done.

Essorant

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2002-08-16 03:19 PM

Thanks everyone

Deb

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

6 posted 2002-08-16 03:30 PM

Enchanting...
This is such an alluring image you have presented.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-08-16 07:17 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, this is roseate and filled with so much passion and delight, I just love this series of yours, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-08-16 08:24 PM

Oh, I am liking this one a LOT.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2002-08-16 08:34 PM

BloomingRose~
Stunning~
You weave a delicate word-delight~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2002-08-17 02:00 AM

Your imagery was fantastic in this piece, I sure enjoyed it a lot.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2002-08-17 07:21 AM

I don't think I'd ever want to tame a lady in red....I'd just as soon enjoy her beautiful spirit.....This is poetically mastered...well done!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

12 posted 2002-08-27 05:24 AM

Deb-
This is just gorgeous.
It's so good to read you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

13 posted 2002-08-27 01:44 PM

Beautiful imagery

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