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Magician
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0 posted 2002-08-16 08:22 AM


Only in the black of night
Can eyes of the wolf be seen
Predatory thoughts of what is,
And what might have been
Glowing red, savage pupils dilated
Lidless and aflame with hate
Singular of purpose, this lust
To destroy any whom threaten fate

Sensing danger as mortal fear awakes
Grips hypnotic as in darkness born
Eyes lit by the light of their malice
Consumed in this firestorm

Knowing, knowing, all my flaws to extol
Growing, growing, the eyes swallow me whole

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1 posted 2002-08-16 09:00 AM


Magician, you have developed a very unique style
which I enjoy ever so much...
That ole wolf is not as dangerous as first appears.
Good write!
~morning hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

VAS
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2 posted 2002-08-16 10:36 AM


Very, very eerie, and yes, metaphorically, it speaks of how in darkness many things appear more sinister/frightening.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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3 posted 2002-08-16 07:11 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Magician, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, this is mesmerizingly beautiful, the wolf can always be tamed by the noble eyes of a lion, or a patient peaceful rest! (sigh)n This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-08-16 09:32 PM



This weaves a spell of howling fear
and yet, and yet, I would draw near
to see if but this wolf is one
that would see the Light of Sun...

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-08-20 04:53 AM


anything about wolves gets me in my heart, and i love this one so much!
Neeraja
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6 posted 2002-08-20 11:23 AM


I love wolves too... and I love this poem!!!

Neeraja

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