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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-15 09:11 PM


“DANCING IN MOONBEAMS”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
We walk as one to the meadow,
your hand I take this night…
Standing together waiting,
touching senses with delight…

Dark is the forest around us,
yet listen, hear the breeze…
Sounds of soft guitars playing,
slipping notes, through trees…

Bluesy chords are the melody,
rhythm embraces each soul…
Full moon lights the darkness,
for two lovers in its control…

Dancing in moonbeams, sensuous,
hips are becoming, as they sway…
It’s moon dancing that we do,
a magical setting, our cabaret…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-15 09:14 PM


This is really nice, Bill! So romantic and dreamy, I felt I was dancing on a moonbeam.
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2 posted 2002-08-15 09:21 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, you always cast moonbeams, fireflies, and other beautiful serenades in your words! (big hugggsssss) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-08-15 09:25 PM


Dancing in moonbeams, sensuous,
hips are becoming, as they sway…
It’s moon dancing that we do,
a magical setting, our cabaret…
---------------------------------
This is beautiful Bill...
and there's that word again...'magical'!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-08-15 09:28 PM


Bluesy chords are the melody,
rhythm embraces each soul…
Full moon lights the darkness,
for two lovers in its control…

Very beautiful...and very romantic, Bill.
I truly enjoyed
~ melodic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-08-28 12:19 PM



Bill-
Very beautiful, my friend.
I enjoyed the romance of this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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6 posted 2002-08-28 12:25 PM


Mr Romance~

So good to see you back posting in full force....I love the blues in this, and the music of love it sofly dances....


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-08-28 12:53 PM


Oh, to think of the time I had wasted trying to learn to do the "moon walk"! That time would have been much better spent learning the "moon dance"!--sounds like a lot more fun!
CSKpoet
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8 posted 2002-08-28 03:14 AM


beautiful and romantic!
thanks for a delightful read!
aloha, Cher

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9 posted 2002-08-28 09:37 AM


Beautiful and romantic scene Bill
Well written!

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10 posted 2002-08-28 09:44 AM


Bill - how did I miss this one? Very sensual and much enjoyed. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Zinsser
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11 posted 2002-08-28 10:23 AM


very beautiful..... love it
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