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Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

0 posted 2002-08-15 08:34 PM

The night has now turned over,
My weary eyes though burning defeat,
Their purpose, for though tired,
In this twilight I find no sleep.
My eyes peel the skyline,
Darting to and fro,
Undressing the darkness in my mind,
Searching for a hint of tomorrow.
A very daunting task,
I eagerly await the dawn,
When the sky removes its mask,
For a new day to be born.
For the moon serves as a mirror,
It reflects thoughts of my heart,
So I stare your face for hours,
As the moon boldly glares me back.
Like the drops of dew to the grass,
Countless sentiments adorn my heart,
Shimmering in this suspended paradise,
Gems of thought that bring you back.
Alas, they will have to suffice,
In this hiatus of my life,
As my heart paces for sunrise,
Beating your name as I close my eyes.

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2002-08-15 08:36 PM

*jaw drops to the floor* Woah! Amazing, I don't know what else to say, loved it!

Kristen

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2002-08-15 08:37 PM

Gabriel,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-08-15 09:06 PM

Yes Gabriel....a very nice poem, love the
metaphors....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-08-15 09:17 PM

"My eyes peel the skyline,
Darting to and fro,
Undressing the darkness in my mind,
Searching for a hint of tomorrow"
I love it! Hello, Gabriel, from Kacy, the midnitesun.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-08-15 09:24 PM

(smiles) Oh Gabriel, this is just lovely, I love it, your words always sparkle with such sunshine and smiles, I love it, always embrace that sunrise, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gabriel, thank youn for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

6 posted 2002-08-15 11:34 PM

Thank you all so much for your compliments,
it is very inspiring and i'm glad my writing has pleased you.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2002-08-28 12:43 PM

Gabriel-
Beautifully penned and a pleasure to read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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