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Keith Morgan
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0 posted 2002-08-15 07:11 PM


Letting Go


My love, where have you gone?
Why did you leave?
Even though it has been years
Since you were stolen away,
It feels like yesterday
When I kissed your lips that last time…

How beautiful it was,
Hearing the ocean cheer
As the moonlight showered us in gold
And the ground absorbed us.
Time it seemed…stood still
If just for a moment
Two bodies…one heart
Joined in the matrimony of fate;
They say love is patient
So lips we part,
Fate took advantage
And stole you away.

To this spot I continue to return,
Hoping and praying
That the hands of time take pity
And returns us our destiny
Or grants us another moment.
But alas, I grow impatient
I must move on,
It is time for you to seek me;
I promise I will not be as hard to find;
And as my footprints lead a path to recovery,
The ocean cries,
Then waves goodbye,
As if knowing it would be the last time.

Marcel


Write from the soul and the words will flow

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-08-15 07:24 PM


WOW Marcel!  Wonderful writing here...
Great feelings and emotions in the imagery.
Excellent write.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2002-08-16 05:11 AM


sometimes it's best to let go...I know.
sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
3 posted 2002-08-16 05:45 AM


Very beautiful and warm poem with much emotion.  I enjoyed it.
Samantha G Kennedy
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since 2002-07-27
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Kent England
4 posted 2002-08-16 06:12 AM


extremely touching release of expression


bravo!


Sammie

^i^

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2002-08-25 05:17 AM


bumpity bump thought this was a great piece! Hope more folks read it!
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