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Magician
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0 posted 2002-08-15 05:37 PM


Intrigue leads to enchantment
Weaving little threads of magic
Some would call entrapment
Some would call tragic
Not I, the one spellbound
Held transfixed forever
Yet there is no sound
As threads begin to sever
And left to my new reality
Like living a waking dream
Or was it just fantasy
To behold my timeless Queen
‘Then’ and ‘There’ are words
Which are given to intrigue
Something never heard
In my fairy tale fatigue
I was a non-believer
Before she did so enchant
Which no daydream deceiver
Could ever supplant


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WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-15 05:53 PM


Magical words. A lovely write.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-08-15 05:56 PM



A weaver of magic...
this, Sir, will be much
appreciated...

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-08-15 06:00 PM


This write Magician...is oh so very full of intrigue..and enchantment.
It held me spellbound...wanting more...not wanting the threads to be severed.
A beautifully inspired write on this sultry summer afternoon...
You poet sir have penned a
Into my secret library it goes...
..for yet another read...then....there.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-08-15 07:15 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is just wonderful, sweet friend, and may this magic light your heart more than any other charm thought possible! (big hugggsssss) You are a true wizard of words, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magician, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

smitty-j
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5 posted 2002-09-17 01:06 PM


wonderful, entrancing words...I love it

phew..outta the fog now Julie...reality awaits(^_~)

J

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6 posted 2002-09-17 01:20 PM



This was indeed enjoyed by this Enchantress!
Would love to see more of your magical talents.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-09-17 01:51 PM


Encore! ThisDiamond
Magician
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8 posted 2002-09-17 02:02 PM


Thank you Smitty-j for finding this way underneath all the real good poetry here.

smitty-j
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9 posted 2002-09-17 02:36 PM


My pleasure....most certainly
J

Magician
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10 posted 2002-09-17 02:45 PM


Its almost as if I know you somehow...thank you.
Pilgrimage
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11 posted 2002-09-17 02:47 PM


Oh, I like this one. The music in your words resounds in my mind.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

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12 posted 2002-09-17 02:52 PM


Thank you Nan.
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