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Luther
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0 posted 2002-08-15 06:11 AM


Author's Comment: This is dedicated to my girlfriend, Melanie... L'amo mi bella bambina.
A World Without “Mel”

The world would be a different place
If we didn’t have MEL
The wind would not touch my face
The flowers would not sMELl
People would slide into MELancholia
A case of MELancholy
The radios would be static
Without a MELody
And if you felt like a sweet treat
A feeling I know well
Your choices would be pretty dull
If there was no caraMEL
You couldn’t visit MELbourne
A place I often travel
And Egypt would not be the same
If It did not have a caMEL
MELenoma would no longer be
I guess that's a good thing
The Spice Girls would be without MEL C
Who couldn't really sing
The world would be a different place
If you ceased to be
The MELlow tone of your voice
Would no longer comfort me
I think of the world without you
It could be a living hell
And thats why I am thankful
To have a world with MEL

By Jordan Aarts


© Copyright 2002 Jordan Aarts - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-15 08:13 PM


What a unique way to do this....well done...


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-16 01:22 AM




(smiles) Oh Jordan, this is soooooo beautiful, I wish I could do something like this for my sweetheart Joanna who I love so very much, though there's not as many words that sound just like her beautiful name, though I can think of millions of other words that do! (big hugggssssss) I just know your Melanie will love this, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jordan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-16-2002 01:22 AM).]

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3 posted 2002-08-30 10:48 PM


very cute...liked it
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