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Luther
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0 posted 2002-08-15 05:41 AM


Angel In Disguise

You’re as beautiful as life itself
The entire world and all its wealth
The perfect body, the perfect mind
Your gorgeous voice that sounds so kind.
I think of you all the time,
What I’d do for you to be mine.
Well I’m not sure if angels are true
But I start to believe when I’m with you
This crazy world is not your place
Not for your beauty or amazing grace
Back up in heaven is where you belong
Free from all danger, where nothing goes wrong
Away from this world; out of my eyes
You are my angel in disguise.

By Jordan Aarts



© Copyright 2002 Jordan Aarts - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-15 06:33 AM



Luther, Welcome to Passions!  I think you'll find a number of angels around here, as well as a few scamps, a few rascals, a lot of fun, and a bunch of members who will enjoy reading your work.  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
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WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-08-15 09:35 AM


Welcome to Passions Luther. This is a lovely poem. I know you'll find the atmosphere here special and inviting. I look forward to reading more from you.
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Gaia
3 posted 2002-08-15 11:18 AM


Welcome to Passions! We have a few angels within these blue pages (but I'm not one of them.
       WELCOME!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-15 06:49 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautifully romantic debut, sweet friend, I love it, may you always have your angel bring sunshine to your heart, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Jordan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jordan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-08-15 07:53 PM


Welcome to Passions Luther!
Very nice first post!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Relax, read and sign other's posts, and most of all, have fun!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-08-15 07:57 PM


Luther,  very nice,  and welcome to a place
of friendship, Passions....

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2002-08-27 03:51 PM



Luther-
What a lovely first post.
I really enjoyed this and I look forward
to reading lots more from you.
Welcome!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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just out of reach
8 posted 2002-08-27 03:53 PM


Very nice. Welcome to Passions!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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