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Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2002-08-15 02:30 AM

The New Born Day

Here Love lave life, heartsongs and call
mens strength to break a perverse wall
and find a peace of grace so sweet
in its touch future minds will meet
with hands turning this age around
a clock that has a better sound,
Just loud enough not to intrude
with "ticks" talking to life too rude
Just fair enow to say "inarm"
the new born day and its fresh charm.

Inarm the new born day
the beauty of a million rays
glim glancing up unto your face.

Inarm the new born day
as heaven rears herself abroad
touch nature and be touched by God.

For what else can give grace?

Inarm: Embrace

Essorant.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (08-16-2002 02:17 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-16 12:02 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, I don't understand how such a beautiful poem can go so far without being noticed, back up you go, yay! (smiles) Yes, He is everywhere and everything He gives life to has grace, for His spirit and love shines in all the flowers that bloom and songs children sing and every beautiful simple pleasure! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, now back up you go where you belong! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Essorant, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-16 02:03 AM

I like it Essorant! The rhymes are great...not a forced one in the lot, I don't think. It has a wonderful message too in its playful way.

Thanks for letting me know it was here.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-08-16 07:04 AM

Someone who likes to enfold
old world charm into one's poetry
will soon become a favorite read
of mine...
write on!

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

4 posted 2002-08-16 12:45 PM

Thank you all. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem.

Essorant

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2002-08-16 09:43 PM

I loved this. As I read I hilighted a line and was going to put it in my response, but then I found another and another....

And well, it was a great poem with a great message.

This is the first of your writings that I have read and I look forward to more.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

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