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Harvest The Day
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Harvest The Day |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Kiss the orange glow of day's end taste sweet tangerine sun & think of me I am citrus wine & sweet brew crushed berries in your tempered glass open your precious gems view the night sky find my trail of light... star lit stairs to my heart enter & stay... Will your arms remain folded resolutely Across the dark expanse of your chest? like a net over many waters? I am a mermaid tangled & struggling Against your barriers Free me Free us... Above the glassy roof, there are rainbows Songs of colors yet to be sung When will we know harmony again? exchange daisies & share thoughts? Look, the moon weeps her beauty onto your face I say my grace A prayer for you & me The sun greets the horizon with new look for me on the shore my basket is filled with the sweetest sunny lemon drops come, harvest the day... ~Tier 8/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, romance and life all rolled into one haven't read you in awhile, glad I came in, but my eyes would love it if you used a larger font size  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* thanks Virginia, I appreciate your taking the time to read my poem. I'll remember to use a larger font when next I write... ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Really liked this Tier, An approachable and accessable weave of hope-long-doubt. A beauty! (insert wise crack here) ~wranx The shortest distance between two points... is sometimes, intolerable. Bukowski [This message has been edited by wranx (08-16-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Wranx. sweet of you to say... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, that last stanza made me smile, I love it, I love lemon drops so much and I know with the smiles and love you always bring your loved ones will always be happy to share the harvest of each day with you! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Most beautiful, Tier, but then, whenever I come in to read you, I know I shall always take away a smile, and leave behind a sigh... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love yr words. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
something we should all know and remember |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kiss the orange glow of day's end taste sweet tangerine sun & think of me I am citrus wine & sweet brew crushed berries in your tempered glass open your precious gems view the night sky find my trail of light... star lit stairs to my heart ================================== Above the glassy roof, there are rainbows Songs of colors yet to be sung When will we know harmony again? exchange daisies & share thoughts? Look, the moon weeps her beauty onto your face I say my grace A prayer for you & me ============================= This is a sunburst beauty...wonderful employ of imagery and color to paint us this lovely poetic scene. Beautiful expressions. very well done poetess Tier. If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
There are so many beautiful lines in this poem, Tier... that I can't seem to pick a favorite... I loved it all.  ~ poetic chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes Tier......so very well put with an appreciation for life so evident. Very well done, a beautiful read. *s* somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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