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The Story (by my 13 yr old son)

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Heather Miller
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The Story
Once upon a time there was this guy,
Who on Calvery was hung so high,
and on His head the thorns he wore,
So we would have sin no more,
He died up on the cross that day,
The day he took all sins away,
So that was how the story went,
When on that day a GREAT life was spent.

Copyright 8/14/02:Andrew Bryan Miller age 13

I thought he did VERY well. This is his first ever poem.
I am such a proud ma ma right now
LITL,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

© Copyright 2002 Heather Anne Gambler/Price - All Rights Reserved
everafterhim
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since 10-08-2001
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All right Andrew. Way to go. Keep it up. You have talent there. Even Uncle Bill was impressed. Tons of Love, Aunt Tina
Heather Miller
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Andrew is pretty shy about this Aunt Tina Every time I tell him that someone else likes it he gets all red in the face

The Proud ma ma,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

JamesMichael
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Very nice...this guy sounds a lot like Jesus...James
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enjoyed

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