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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-08-14 09:33 PM



To The Nothing Denied


in days my dreams
may turn to sand
and things not turn out
the way I planned
but at night
I can dream of you
where we run
mudding our feet in dew
and sail upon romantic
moon beam tide
where we kiss in shadows
to the nothing denied
closely dance to silver
moon hung on air
you are as close as sleep
and I can find you there
but just like the sand
there comes an end to our play
when day interrupts us
and takes you away


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2002-08-14 09:45 PM


perfect Helen...I could have been thinking those exact thought *s

M

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2 posted 2002-08-14 09:48 PM


Makes one want to rush to sleep,
Well done

Gloom

Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-08-14 09:59 PM


beautiful...
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-08-14 10:19 PM


helen - you're so soft with your writings. This one is that way, soft and delicate...

BC

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5 posted 2002-08-15 12:22 PM


Dreams will do in the absence of kinder days. Wishing you both.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

rwood
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6 posted 2002-08-15 12:28 PM


You always have a way of saying exactly what it feels like to feel that way..If that makes any sense? Very nice write.

Sincerely,
Reg

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7 posted 2002-08-15 09:03 PM


This may be soft,  but it is yearningly
warm and wanting.....Oh yes it is!

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-15 09:32 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, such a soft yearning fills these words as the sand blankets the tone, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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displaced
9 posted 2002-08-16 05:12 AM


beautiful!
Krishankins
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10 posted 2002-08-17 11:09 PM


So beautiful it's almost sad.
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11 posted 2002-08-19 02:21 PM


This is great, bump to the top
Kethry
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12 posted 2002-08-19 05:50 PM


Beautifully done, it makes me want to dream forever.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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