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akira
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since 2002-07-13
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0 posted 2002-08-14 09:25 PM



There was no doubt in my mind
That maybe somehow, we could find
True love in each others arms
And a safe place to hide from harm

Through your love I’ve learned to smile
Through rough times and through the miles
I can now see life as I once did
When love my heart no longer hid

Now my soul is dancing free
There’s a new excitement inside of me
For your love has opened my eyes
And caused my dreams to be undenied

Akira
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© Copyright 2002 Felicity Kino - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 2002-08-14 10:35 PM


Liked this, akira. It was good throughout.

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.      

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2 posted 2002-08-17 09:09 PM


Felicity~
It's so beautiful when love sets us free~
Wonderfully poetic thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2002-08-17 09:12 PM


A beautiful spell, the harbor of love.
Best Regards, ThisDiamond.

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4 posted 2002-08-17 11:05 PM




(smiles) Oh Felicity, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes, your dreams are undenied and may they always bring smiles to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Felicity, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2002-08-17 11:08 PM


Akira... I really enjoyed this. Keep writing ... Paul
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-08-17 11:20 PM


akira - love, the magic of it, as you have written...

BC

akira
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since 2002-07-13
Posts 79
Idaho
7 posted 2002-08-18 12:19 PM


Thank you all for your feed back on my poem....its very sweet...i appreciate it alot

Akira
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Aol/Aim name: mjhawaii50
Yahoo Messenger name: Akiras_Fire
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secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,
8 posted 2002-08-18 07:56 AM


Hiy dear...
I really respect what u have written... I feel u coz I have the same situation I really like it ... its really from ur heart,,,

keep writting what inside ur heart,,,

              good luck

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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