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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-14 08:55 PM

I've heard the whisper
of your soul

a soft sound
touching me

relating your story
upon whispered voice
to my ear

a gentle telling,
a caress
of who you are

I've heard your life
this way

I'll keep it secret
my darling,
in the hush
as it was told.

WhiteRose

Speak to me in whispers,
and I'll listen with my heart.

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-14-2002 08:59 PM).]

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

1 posted 2002-08-14 10:13 PM

a quieter whisper
is night
Playful is the wind
of the day
For all to be snapped up
in delightful exuberance
ah
but night tells secrets of the soul
if you are close enough
to the whisperer

your writing is compelling and real-life
it makes it even more absorbing to read.
JF

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-08-14 10:53 PM

WhiteRose - this is like a whisper in my ear. A loving tender write...

BC

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-08-14 10:59 PM

This,
This was really, very nice.
A treat to read.

I must agree, twas whispered.

I think, one of your best.

~wranx

The shortest distance between two points...
is sometimes, intolerable.

Bukowski

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-14 11:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwww, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, this whispers like a tickle of spring, sooooooo romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!