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SweetSean18
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0 posted 2002-08-14 07:42 PM


August 26

Today I'm in a different world and place.
So far away with many faces I don't know.
It feels that I am floating into space.
I could possibly run into a friend or foe.
Going to class, hoping not to fall on my face.
Walking into the class of 200, I think "Oh, no"
I pull up at the bike rack, but there is no space.
What friends will I meet and what will they think of me so?
Looking around at campus, I don't see a familiar face.
The professor goes on and on as I sink into my seat lower.
I run to my dorm room, leaving my books behind as a trace.
Shoudl I party and be a rebel like Tom Sawyer?
The next morning, I wake up early at seis.
When I grow up, do I want to be a doctor or a lawyer?
I begin to wonder if I am going to like this place.


Thank you for visiting my poetry.

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1 posted 2002-08-15 09:29 AM



Give it time, give it time.  I understand the trepidation, but trust me, you shall live through it, and in style, with CLASS!

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2 posted 2002-08-15 11:33 AM


Boy do I remember that day oh so well!  Now, hang in there even though it's hard, and please come back and write some more on how things are turning out, as I know what my ending was  but want to hear yours
I enjoyed this and it's great to write out fears of any kind so your poem is a great example to others, great job!

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.   Sharon

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3 posted 2002-08-15 11:48 AM


SweetSean18
Not to worry everything will be fine. Enjoyed

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4 posted 2002-09-02 09:47 AM


you'll like it
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