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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-08-14 07:32 PM


“JUST WANT YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
We met a while ago near the bay,
held your hand in mine softly…
Felt a heart beating with mine,
it talked to me affectionately…

Heard the surf kissing the sands,
watched the gulls flying around…
Didn’t take me very long it seems,
to fall in love with you I found…

Try it sometime with someone,
go somewhere special with her…
You’ll see exactly what I mean,
magic it will be there together…

Now I know I just want you,
pleasures felt beyond delight…
The way you taught me sensually,
about loving you through the night…
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-14 07:35 PM


Very romantic, very nice. As always, I enjoyed. :-)
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-14 07:36 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I would just die to share it with my Joanna and take her out for the time of her life, I only wish she lived closer as all I want is her! (sigh) This is very romantic and sweet, dearest friend, God Bless You, I'm so happy to see you again after your 2-day trip, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-14 07:40 PM


Ah Mr. Romance has returned...
You were missed...
This is wonderful...and not just because
it contains the word 'magic'!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ShadowRider
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4 posted 2002-08-14 10:09 PM


Man!   are you sooooo smoooooth

The Sinatra of Poetry,   Bill.
What could be cooler than that?  *smile*

jeff

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Gaia
5 posted 2002-08-14 11:11 PM


This is so beautiful and romantic, Bill. You have a warm and sensitive heart that shows,NO, it GLOWS, through your poetry. Thank you, for always being YOU, and for letting us know you just a bit through your words. I always feel as if I am in the same room with you, a dear friend.
Suetang
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6 posted 2002-08-15 12:48 PM


Hello Bill

This was so very lovely and very romantic.  Such a lucky lady to have such beautiful words written about her.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Duncan
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7 posted 2002-08-15 02:03 AM


Try it sometime with someone,
go somewhere special with her…
You’ll see exactly what I mean,
magic it will be there together…

I would have to agree, very recently.

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
8 posted 2002-08-15 05:58 AM


wonderfully romantic and great advice
  enjoyed Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Samantha G Kennedy
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9 posted 2002-08-16 06:10 AM


not only does this read beautifully, it exhales beauty

a stunning read

Sammie

^i^

Marsha
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10 posted 2002-08-16 11:48 AM


Bill darling boy oh my! This is simply one of the best I’ve seen in a long time. I truly don’t get here enough but there is only so much time in the day. I’m glad I didn’t get to miss this utter beauty it is extremely special the writing is perfect and again you have written pure gold. Beautiful work really beautiful. Romance at its finest


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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