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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Pauper's Pockets ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have dreamed a rich man's dreams paid for out of pauper's pockets Never wanted more than I had except a friendship locket~ Then a loving friend, came with gentle face around my neck she hung the locket in friendship's swing of grace~ Richly rewarding ~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now you know how very special this little treasure will be to so many of us! Thank you for this! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart , how special is this? Well, I could lie and say I s’pose it’ll do, you know of course that it does much more than just do, it is extraordinarily good writing. Your metaphor, your line and style each perfectly formed to make a superb whole. You ALWAYS surpass my expectations of your writing, I roll up to your poem, sit down beside and I’m prepared to be delighted, and what happens? I’ll tell you what, I’m always bowled over by the mastery and the magic you weave into your words.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge Friendship has a way of locketing the heart..yours is very special. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hi Ya Sis Yep, it's me again... Thought I'd let you know I stop by Passions... from time to time. Dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a lovely gift! Friendship is the BEST! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: Lovely poem and so is the locket! Betty Lou Hebert |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The best is, someone bearing the gift of friendship. Lovely poem Marge. Hugs, Deb |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A very lovely poem Marge. It touches the heart. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Marge... It's grace sits gently on these blue pages. *S* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Now this is a treasure. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those first two lines cover me completely Marge!! Clever write as usual...... a pleasure to read. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you got a good thing going here keep writing i encourage you to continue |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Friends~ It's a true story ... and her name is Bonnie~ And the 'locket' was *gift-given* to me so very long ago .... but sits in the jewel box of precious treasures still today~ It will be passed on to my granddaughter, Delaney ... with the reverent hope that she embraces a friendship as precious as Bonnie has given to me~  More importantly ... we still wear the friendship that was fostered in college days ... she has always been 'friendship's swing of grace'~ ***Thank you ALL sooooooo much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I'm just smiling and loving this one.  This is such a special write and it's got me all choked up. That kind of friendship is priceless. You do KNOW just how much I love you, don't you?...a WHOLE BUNCH! Love and BIG HUGS, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-27-2002 05:16 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovley Marge - true friends are jewels in their own right. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Yes ... I do ! You are such a sweetie ... I think you're a locket~ NightShade~ Thanks so much ... yes, jewels indeed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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