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Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 2002-08-14 01:51 AM


Whispering winds invite me
To visit those dreams tucked away.
Images dance across my mind
As I walked with you today.

It's been so long since you've been gone.
You held my hand; I felt you near.
I've traveled so many empty miles.
Wiped away so many tears.

Now putting the sadness aside.
In reflections of another time,
Hearing the laughter we once shared
If only time could rewind.

Draining my mind of emotion.
From inspiration I now write.
Words of image etched in gold
Perhaps these words will ignite.

Within this heart of a poet
Treasured dreams and thoughts flow through.
Visions written on parchment
With loving thoughts of you.

© Copyright 2002 Eloise - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-08-14 02:03 AM


Within this heart of a poet
Treasured dreams and thoughts flow through.
Visions written on parchment
With loving thoughts of you.

Beautifully said, Eloise...
~ hugs from a chipmunk

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2002-08-14 02:36 AM


Hello Eloise

This was simply outstanding as your words painted such a vivid picture of love.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-08-14 05:43 AM


Enjoyed Eloise...James
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