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August Moon
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August Moon |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Beneath the starlit sky Is where two lovers swoon Their spirits rise together Attempting to reach the moon The fireflies are many As they dance throughout the night Studded diamonds pierce the air As they flash their golden light Two souls have been united As two hearts now beat as one They'll remain in love's embrace 'til the rising of the sun I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (08-15-2002 12:24 AM).] |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
and many more moons and sunsets to pass i hope... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love firefly evenings so much, may you always catch all your dreams happily! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sounds like romance is in the air. Very beautiful Suetang. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The fireflies are many As they dance throughout the night Studded diamonds pierce the air As they flash their golden light Such a lovely night, Sue... and very impressive writing  ~ hugs from a garden pestLyra |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Such a romantic lovely evening. I will be looking for the moon over New England and hoping for the same romantic night. I enjoyed this so much Sue. Your poetry gets better with each poem you write. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - thanks for a lovely romantic poem - stirs up all kinds of nice feelings - you write love well - Paul |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Very pretty! So romantic! Betty Lou Hebert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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