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CSKpoet
Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-13 11:46 PM




tangerine morning
singing birds in chorus line
quiet gentle mist

yellow bus flash red
boys and girls at playground games
empty nests at home

plate lunch four dollars
loco moco two scoops rice
saimin noodle smile

open air market
flower lei’s and hula dolls
tropical shave ice

local meeting place
talking story on park bench
happy memories

brown sun kissed faces
song and dance sweet melodies
lovely hula hands

purple shadows fall
lets go on a moonlight swim
lovers silhouettes

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2002-08-14 05:46 AM


Simply lovely...James
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2002-08-18 12:35 PM


superb haiku and senyru!
Thoroughly enjoyed...the pic, too!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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