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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-13 07:42 PM



Full Circling

~*Marge Tindal*~

I
have..............come

full....................circle

turn...................turn

finding.......complete

love

turn................turn

folding.................these

soft..................arms

that.............hold

you

sweetly..........seeking

delicate..............rapture

that....................only

holds.............love

foreverly~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2002-08-13 07:46 PM



Sweet Marge, you keep loving him forever dear for your love profides us with beautiful poetry.

So keep those circles circling

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-08-13 07:47 PM



Marge, this simply wraps around me!  
Thank you!

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2002-08-13 07:57 PM



      As
        love    smiles
       life                laughs
       and                      the
       heart              shall
        sing      with
      us

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-08-13 08:25 PM


A zillion hugs in this poem - it's wonderful to hear the smiles and love come pouring out of you.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-08-13 08:31 PM


and what a beautiful circle it is Margie gal....hugs to you for this beauty.

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-08-13 09:41 PM


Circles of life that have so much to say
within them.....well done Marge...

Betty
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7 posted 2002-08-13 10:36 PM


This is so pretty.


Trillium
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8 posted 2002-08-13 11:37 PM


Marge:  This is so unique and would make a lovely wedding poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2002-08-14 12:05 PM


And it would look great on a wedding invitation !
When is the big day, Marge?
~ lots of hugs from this rodent


Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (08-14-2002 12:05 AM).]

cjohnson/poet2079
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10 posted 2002-08-15 10:42 AM


Marge, what a tender and warm embrace of love; I agree, it would make a lovely wedding invitation.


Thanks for your warm welcome!


eyssence


[This message has been edited by cjohnson/poet2079 (08-15-2002 10:44 AM).]

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2002-08-15 12:25 PM


*MyFriends~
Thank you all so much ...
Bill and I feel encircled by the love that we have found with one another~

TitiaDear~
I hope to do just that !
Thank you sweet lady ... I can't wait for you to meet my Bill~

Karilea~
Ahhhhh ... that is how it should be~
Thank you sweetie~

MarkB~
You are in good 'shape'~
Thank you my friend~

Marti~
And with what I get returned from the *giving*,
presents me with the chance to hand out a zillion more *HUGS*~
Love ya'

GentleSpirit~
You are such a sweetie ... thank you~

Magnus~
Needless to mention ... I'm just crazy about those circles~
Thanks hon~

BettyMyFriend~
Thanks for being here ... and for being YOU~

BettyLou~
Hmmmmm ?  Funny you should mention that ...
I've had the loveliest request from a new Internet friend for a poem for the front of her wedding invitations ... (AND ... believe it or not ... she found me online and asked to use one of my poems as HER wedding vows)... I granted it gladly~
The poem for her vows is -
'Every Giver Needs A Taker' ...
/pip/Forum37/HTML/001357.html
and she and her intended are getting married December 14.
I'm just ecstatic to be a part of their union~

Lyra~
Hmmmmmm ?
Ya' know ... you just may be right ...
and the 'day' is 'soon'~

CJohnson~
Thank you so very much~
It's just wonderful to have you in the circle of friends and poets~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Samantha G Kennedy
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12 posted 2002-08-16 06:00 AM


beautifully presented, wonderful content


adorable!

Sammie

^i^

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2002-08-16 04:47 PM


Samantha~
Thank you ever so much~
It could just as easily have been 'heart' shaped ... it speaks from mine~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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