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chitsank
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0 posted 2002-08-13 02:23 PM


By the window sill, I was seated,
Watching the scenes outside the window,
Yonder on the tree was the nest of a sparrow.
watching the sparrow it’s little one feed.
Oh wingless little one,
You will be soon gone,
Forgetting the love and care
Showered by your dear mother.
Oh little one, as you are vulnerable,
She nurses you till you are able.
She teaches you to fly,
And then you turn sly,
And days after you leave the cozy nest,
that sheltered you from rain and sun,
I still see the Sparrow on the tree rest.
With the sincere hope of your return.

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1 posted 2002-08-13 02:26 PM



Welcome to Passions!  You have a regard for nature, and that is good, for many of us do and hold it up well for all to see.  Please, check your E-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

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2 posted 2002-08-13 02:36 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is such a gorgeous twittering debut, I LOVE IT, I love sparrows so much and your words are filled with their sweet songs! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

chitsank
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3 posted 2002-08-13 02:50 PM


Thanx Karilea & Noah for your kind words of appreciation.

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4 posted 2002-08-13 03:29 PM


Welcome to Passions.  I look forward to more of your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

chitsank
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5 posted 2002-08-13 03:36 PM


Thanx for reading.. I too will read ur works.
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6 posted 2002-08-13 03:49 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Wonderful entrance post you have here!
Make yourself at home and enjoy!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

chitsank
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7 posted 2002-08-14 01:20 AM


Thanx Nancy for reading and sharing ur views.
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