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moment on holiday |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A heart lives up to definition moment on holiday from complication sometimes dreams just come true falling into time with you kiss me as I ask remember promising to hold forever remain as I leave to verse my love my world my hand in yours |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Verse away, Duncan... I could use a daily dose of you...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Never mind what people say I think it's great LOL enjoyed the write. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
hmmm - i'll be honest with you D-mon, this isn't my favorite. it's ok, but it's lacking the honesty i've come to expect from ya.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed the read Duncan....but, I do prefer those open, honest, soul bearing ones you have been doing... still this is great stuff. ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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mestesa78 Junior Member
since 2002-08-12
Posts 24 |
No one could have said it better. I love this poem. Short, sweet, full of truth.... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, I kinda like the happy side to ya. Nice, simple and uncluttered just as love should be in the beginning stages. Enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Yay!!! Ooohhhhh...I love both sides of you, sweet friend, I hope things are beginning to brighten up for you and all your dreams are coming true as you are so deserving of true happiness! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Holiday? Holiday? Who was on holiday??? Don’t know bout you…but I was in Church!!! Rofl.  You can never win or lose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I really like this one, Duncan... its nice to see the light side of you for a change...  ~ hugs from the garden pestLyra |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Inspired to write "moment". Go see. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes dreams just come true falling into time with you =========================== what this? was that rhyme??? Well now...must of been one heck of a holiday...one heck of a kiss....knocked Dunc muse into rhyming  I bet youre walking around with that "stupid grin on your face again"... just the thought of it makes me mothy heart smile. LOL @ Tracey and being in church. |
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