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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-08-13 10:54 AM


The counter didn’t gleam, it wasn’t clean,
But the coffee was strong in the greasy spoon,
The eggs and bacon smell, transformed it well,
To refuge from reality with a tin box tune,
The dregs to hasty sips preparing for bosses whips
Of words of abuse and degradation of spirit,
The caffeine will end soon sustain them barely till noon
As hope of sleepy dreams unravel them

Gloom.


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-08-13 11:40 AM


dark one...i see you are stirring it up...helen
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2002-08-13 01:51 PM


me thinks you take your coffee black,
black as ebony, perhaps

it sounds like a café to stay away

from

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
3 posted 2002-08-13 02:38 PM


great!!!!! i love it!!

thank you!!

could we publish this in a little book of poetry  about coffee?

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