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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-08-13 09:22 AM



Complete
~*~
My canvas is blank,
but the heat is on,
so I’ll splash a little bold
till the embers of fulfill are met.
Spreading the enticement of mellow,
onto a moaning sigh.
The painting
is complete


BloomingRose


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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-13 09:45 AM


And it is a beautiful painting. Love this piece. It's soft and filled with visions of artistry.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise
2 posted 2002-08-13 09:52 AM


This is very wonderfully written imagery, Deb. I love the metaphors used to make this warm and passionate.
aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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