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Open Poetry #21

Can't Sleep

TriXter
Member

since 2002-03-20

Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-08-13 02:29 AM

Girl I musta been crazy, to just let you pass
i hadta be a fool, to just watch you walk right by
and now im all alone, and feeling really blue
all of this happaning, its all so crazy to me
sometimes you do things
thats you will later regret, but again walk by me

I cant sleep baby
i cant think baby
i cant live girl
without you in my life
i cant walk stright
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont wanan do nothin, if i cant see you

oh i must admit, it was all my doing
you looked my way, but i tried not to stare
now at the spot i look down and, you aint standin there,
Sometimes i sit and wonder, What could i done

Cause i cant sleep baby
i cant think stright
i cant live baby
without you in my life
i cant walk straight
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont want to do nothin if i, cant be with you
and i cant do nothin if youre, not around

now i play the msuic to sooth the soul,
cause todays done its toll, And i wanna let ya know that

I cant sleep baby
i cant thinkbaby
i cant live girl
without you in my life
i cant walk stright
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont wanan do nothin, if i cant see you again.

(Inspired by R.kelly and that Somone)

The man of few words...

[This message has been edited by TriXter (08-13-2002 02:31 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-08-13 05:14 AM

TriXter,
If you can't lift weights you are really in trouble. Good song.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-18 12:47 PM

Yep, excellent song! I'd love to hear it. Powerfully plaintive with excellent rhythm.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-31 03:38 AM

yep, a well-known feeling.

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