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Can't Sleep

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TriXter
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since 03-20-2002
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The One


0 posted 08-13-2002 02:29 AM       View Profile for TriXter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for TriXter

Girl I musta been crazy, to just let you pass
i hadta be a fool, to just watch you walk right by
and now im all alone, and feeling really blue
all of this happaning, its all so crazy to me
sometimes you do things
thats you will later regret, but again walk by me

I cant sleep baby
i cant think baby
i cant live girl
without you in my life
i cant walk stright
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont wanan do nothin, if i cant see you

oh i must admit, it was all my doing
you looked my way, but i tried not to stare
now  at the spot i look down and, you aint standin there,
Sometimes i sit and wonder, What could i done

Cause i cant sleep baby
i cant think stright
i cant live baby
without you in my life
i cant walk straight
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont want to do nothin if i, cant be with you
and i cant do nothin if youre, not around

now i play the msuic to sooth the soul,
cause todays done its toll, And i wanna let ya know that

I cant sleep baby
i cant thinkbaby
i cant live girl
without you in my life
i cant walk stright
go to the gym and lift weight
i dont wanan do nothin, if i cant see you again.


(Inspired by R.kelly and that Somone)



The man of few words...

[This message has been edited by TriXter (08-13-2002 02:31 AM).]

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Kethry
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1 posted 08-13-2002 05:14 AM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

TriXter,
If you can't lift weights you are really in trouble. Good song.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


VAS
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since 11-16-2000
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2 posted 08-18-2002 12:47 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Yep, excellent song!  I'd love to hear it. Powerfully plaintive with excellent rhythm.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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3 posted 12-31-2002 03:38 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yep, a well-known feeling.
 
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