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Open Poetry #21

Summer Twilight

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-08-13 01:13 AM

The sullen sea from my balcony
is mirror gray sky
it’s been lazy…
raining, two summer days now
and like the ocean, the dog days ebb,
low whispers,from an abandoned conch shell
beckoning me……. come to the sea
placing pink side against my ear,
from inside comes a hallow sound
my small child hears the ocean captured
passion always seeks more
from the hearts of lovers……
the sultry breeze touches
like your breath on my skin
the sweet perfume of you
lingers like salt air
and clings like sand to moist legs
in the far horizon,
the ocean swallows the sun
I'm sipping twilight and waiting for paradise.

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-13-2002 01:16 AM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-08-13 05:10 AM

Cheryl,
lovely warm images you have painted in your poem.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2002-08-13 06:21 AM

I'm sipping twilight and waiting for paradise.
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Lovely imagery...lovely poem!

Deb

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