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misery_made_beautiful
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since 2002-08-10
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0 posted 2002-08-12 08:33 PM


Staggering,
a slow winds keep,
flooding my mind,
of swirling vines,
the pumpkin patch reaps.

A soft chill,
a creative glint,
dancing gold from green,
dead branches,
a flame,
smoldering.

The creeping,
the crawling,
the chirping,
gone, sleeping, dead, decaying,
my deep sleep,
finally,
I'm craving.

Dimming light,
the early sighs,
darkened comfort,
nocturnal delight,
a time to roam,
or nearly fly,
to the moon above,
autumn skies.

Shadow's taunt,
a child risen,
warm gloves,
hats,
keep wrapped,
closer growing, glowing orange,
creeping indecision.

Raining sweet,
a cloud in chocolate,
wide eyes peek,
through rising steam,
seeing the leaves,
friendly teetering,
around an aged,
lonely,
yawning tree.

"www.miserymadebeautiful.com"

"Aging keeps life interesting"

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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
1 posted 2002-08-12 09:58 PM


vivid autumn memorimages evoked here
I think everyone would relate to this
back in school
halloween's coming
dark so early
cool outside
leaf raking
liked this a lot
looking forward to more
photographs
BS

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

misery_made_beautiful
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2 posted 2002-08-12 10:01 PM


Hey, thanks BriSci...
Looking forward to your up and coming...


misery_made_beautiful
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3 posted 2002-08-12 10:02 PM


PS
thanks for throwing the life preserver!

[This message has been edited by misery_made_beautiful (08-12-2002 10:03 PM).]

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4 posted 2002-08-12 11:06 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I believe every season holds its own unique edities and you describe the canvas so well here! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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