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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-12 07:46 PM



Solicitude Of Solitude
~*Marge Tindal*~


Away from the hustle-bustle
I am summoned
to touch the solitude of me~

The inner quiet that keeps me grounded
tethers me in tendril surround
I let it cocoon me~

Warmly aware
that I am metamorphosis
awakening~

Making time ... to take time
to touch ...
touch ...
me~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-08-12 07:48 PM


Marge,
How about a big

NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2002-08-12 07:49 PM


WOW! You are pulling up some fabulous poems in the last couple of days. How about we combine your solitude with my serenity and awaken from the cocoon together?

Mighty fine writing dear friend.

Love ya, Marti

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-08-12 08:02 PM


Wonderful writing here Marge.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2002-08-12 08:04 PM


Ahhhh ... a peaceful and quiet moment of reflection Marge ... I needed that little reminder, thank you for this quiet interlude of words, my friend.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2002-08-12 08:18 PM


Beautiful poem,Marge. As well as the picture.
Martie
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6 posted 2002-08-12 08:25 PM


Marge-sis

You take the quiet moment and turn it into self knowledge and growth.  Exquisite!

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7 posted 2002-08-13 01:25 PM


Marge:  I can feel the serentiy and awareness seeping out of this poem! Just beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-08-13 01:27 PM


Both sweet and sensuous... and aware.
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Beautiful, Marge...just wonderful!  

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10 posted 2002-08-13 01:32 PM


Truly lovely. A vision, both for eye and mind.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

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11 posted 2002-08-14 05:57 AM


Hey Marge....This is something I wish I was able to do lately.....Very well done as usual!
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12 posted 2002-08-14 07:56 AM


Touching you and making time?....Hmmmm, sounds interesting....Ya got the time?
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13 posted 2002-08-15 12:27 PM


An absolutely lovely write, Marge...
It sends out those "be good to yourself" vibrations which so many of us need right now.
~ big big hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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14 posted 2002-08-16 05:45 AM


Oh I echo al left said here to your piece!!


a wonderful write!

"The inner quiet that keeps me grounded
tethers me in tendril surround
I let it cocoon me"


awesome imagery, tenderly written

Sammie

^i^

[great title and picture too]

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2002-08-16 11:53 AM


Seymour~
Yeah ... I'll take it !

MartiGal~
In the solitude ... I find the serenity~
Meet ya' there !
Thank you soooooooooo much for all you are~

SueTang~
Thank you dear~

Kit~
And in the 'interlude' ... may you find a moment of quiet reflection~
Thanks lady~

SuzieQ~
I miss ya' gal ... and I thank you profusely for your friendship and encouragement~

MartieSis~
I try ... and it is so important to find the 'meadow of my mind' where I can luxuriate in quietude~
Love ya' .... me do~

BettyLou~
Ahhhhhhh .... to share it so that others may grasp it ... is my mission~
Thank you~

BSquirrel~
To know the 'aware' is a precious moment spent~
Thank you very much~

Karilea~
Thanks ... you know the cocooning ... and the metamorphosis that lifts the sprirt~
*Hugs*

WhiteRose~
Thanks a whole bunch~

ETHome~
To 'wish' it is not enough ... just DO IT~
Find your 'meadow' my friend ... find your 'meadow'~
It is there waiting for your serenity-romp~

ToeMan~
LOL ... thanks fella~
Me thinks it's one of those 'won't touch that one' moments !

Lyra~
You got it !
Making the time to be in touch is so important ... we just gotta do it~

Samantha~
Thank you so very much ... I appreciate knowing you enjoyed it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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