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My heart cried

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Goodknight
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0 posted 08-12-2002 07:29 PM       View Profile for Goodknight   Email Goodknight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Goodknight

My heart cried
But no one sees
My soul is sighing
But is it me
I want to say
I want it right
I try and try
With all my might
Without a poem
This was all I had
Nothing got out
When I was sad
My poems now say it
They show my soul
A few who care to read
Are my console
© Copyright 2002 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-12-2002 07:33 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Goodknight
Well done, enjoyed the read.
Martie
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2 posted 08-12-2002 07:46 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Paul

A feeling that most poets have...the need to express in words so many pieces of the heart.  Enjoyed this!
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Paul, as Martie said...this is a feeling that most writers have at one time or another.  
A deep need to get it out...onto paper.
Excellent thoughts well penned here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Paul, I know just how you feel, I have this bereaved feeling a lot too, for I have no friends in my neighborhood and I always want to feel special here as I love you and so many here so much as friends and just want to be noticed! (sigh) You can count on me for one to always read your gorgeous words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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Its the absolute truth, Paul...
beautifully said.

I have found that poetry expresses my very deepest soul.
~ lots of late night hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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Great expression dear Goodknight... I really liker it... that happened to me too..
enjoyed???
good luck,,

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)
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Same here, Paul. I like this
Sandra
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hmm  i can understand your feelings... glad you voiced them
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And some days what should be on paper, just will not come out. Grrrr....

Wonderful....Hugs, Marti
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Beautiful....Paul, thank you for this....


Lauren~

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I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Suetang
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Hello Paul

This was absolutely delightful and how well I could relate to your feelings.  I feel I am exposing my soul each and every time I put my pen to paper.  Thank you for sharing such a special part of yourself with us.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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I care to read...and know.
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