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vandana
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0 posted 2002-08-12 04:56 PM



Did you miss me?
While
I was away
From me
Did you sang this song?
Yes
I have missed you
Through lonely misty nights
No arms that won't hold me tight
The stars that were covered
By the clouds
Did you miss me?
That now
You are longing
for me to hold you tight
When Iam home
Did you miss me?
Yes
I have missed you so
I was dying
to see you again
That day
When I left home
I felt lonely
And was thinking of the times
of you and I
And wanted It
to come back to you
I missed you so
So that was only my heart
would find a way to get
me back home
and lonely days would end
So Here Iam
Asking you
Did you miss me?
Yes I have missed you

[This message has been edited by vandana (08-12-2002 04:57 PM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2002-08-12 05:02 PM


I can imagine some kind of Lisa Loeb music with this one to make it a song...very nice.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-12 05:57 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, this is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, I am sure your love misses you and I hope soon you find all your heart desiresn and have it close forever! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-08-14 05:51 AM


Missing can be very intense at times...James
Nazera29
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4 posted 2002-08-14 05:44 PM


this poem shows your intense feelings, and i think we can all relate to this feeling of longing to be with someone again.  you showed us all your willingness to share these hard feelings. great job

*We are the hero in our own story*

Magnus
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5 posted 2002-08-14 05:54 PM


Vandana,  very nicely done....surely they
have missed you as you have missed them..


And I hope he comes to you soo...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2002-08-14 11:26 PM


The answer is YES. I have been away from the board for a while. And I really did miss you!
secretlife
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7 posted 2002-08-18 01:11 AM


Great words.. I also always miss someone .... Keep writting..

              'good Luck'

Secretlife
(Easy come,,Easy go)


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