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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-08-12 11:13 AM



Of Time's Passing

Night sky graces the dark with its stars
In moments passing, drifting go I
Dreams of a time when in arms comfort, yours
'Til daylight appears and the stars are in hide.

Time moves so quickly, unfolding its hold
Beauty and truth seem to lessen its wear
Not enough time, as each morn begins rise
Waiting for never, a time once to share.

Do you recall any moment from this?
Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss

Uncovering my thoughts wherein shadows lie
To be second to none, in time's passing, wish I.

Someday, maybe, perhaps time will slow
In arms each comforted, a love to bestow.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2002-08-12 01:33 PM


Do you recall any moment from this?
Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss

This is a unique turn of phrase and it stuck out in this poem. To think of a memory as a kiss frozen in your mind. I like this very much. A novel perspective.

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2002-08-12 02:31 PM


Oh Maureen, I sure HOPE they recall some of what meant so much to us. This is powerful.
Sandra

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3 posted 2002-08-12 02:32 PM


enjoyed
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-08-12 06:50 PM


Wynter~

'Do you recall any moment from this?
Frozen in mind, each memory's kiss

Uncovering my thoughts wherein shadows lie
To be second to none, in time's passing, wish I.

Someday, maybe, perhaps time will slow
In arms each comforted, a love to bestow.'


And some days ... it's all I can recall~
Lovely .... lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2002-08-13 08:44 AM


WhiteRose, thank you for the  kind response. *s

Sandra, I doubt that much of what we feel is felt by "them". But one can always hope,
hugss
M

vandana, I am always so happy to see you have stopped by to read me. Thank you V.
  
Marge~ I would someday like to believe that I am someone's priority, again...I can only hope.
You are very lucky, both you and Bill to have found one another.

many hugsss...counting the days
M


  

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-08-13 07:29 PM


Maureen darling heart only you could have written this, such sweet simplicity and such perfectly written beauty, Truly gorgeous writing darling heart I love it utterly


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-08-13 07:31 PM


Hello Maureen

This was simply lovely as is the photo of you.  I hope all is well with you.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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8 posted 2002-08-13 07:37 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, this reminded me so much of that 80's one-hit wonder song "I'll stop the world and melt with you!" (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I know this will happen, just keep believing in loves magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-12-31 03:22 AM


it only moves faster, i know that well
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