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Oceanic Canvas Haiku

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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise


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Sea foam curved in clouds
rainbow watercolor art
brushing a new wave

Touch of azure sea
Arching bold into the sky
Waves leaving more blue

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2002 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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When the blue is as bright as your words present, then it is a blue most definitely appreciated.  Wonderful Haikus you give us.
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(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always make such beautiful poetic waves across these pages, this reminded me so much of the gorgeous California coast, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Island in Paradise


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Mark: And thanks so much for reading and leaving me such gracious words.

Noah:Yes we could say California..That is where I first got the ocean into my bloodstream(grew up there and came to Hawaii about 4 years ago after traveling through the South Pacific...yep the poems about ocean are my love affair with sea.
thanks for always being so kind in your words to me
hugs to both, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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Cher, although in my heart the mountains will always be my home, there is something so peaceful about the Ocean that draws me back over and over again.  This is a delightful gem, and that graphic is just awesome.  Well done, and very enjoyed!!!

somebody tell me, please help me....
understand.......(as sung by Trace Adkins)

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me

Kit McCallum
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Cheryl ... these are both delightfully written ... you've captured the power and beauty in so few words. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit
CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise


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Gentle Spirit: my other love is of the mountains..I lived there for 20 years before the sea claimed my attentions...I write of mountains in haiku when the fall and winter come..I miss diamond snow....thanks for such a wonderful comment.

Kit: wow ..I think my job is accomplished if this does what you say. any kind word from you is so very welcome and treasured.
hugs to both, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

JamesMichael
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Nice Cher...you have created a canvas of words...James
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