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In Place of Silence
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In Place of Silence |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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For Richard, My Brother Time is now our Friend River of time Reflections there was no rain, tears there was no dawn, dusk a reunion of survival -- autumns, now of colorful leaves {and I cried for you} You fell so fast from grace your innocent smile hiding tears of fear Ropes both ends pulled clowns fell somewhat forgotten in my lonely years of missing {and I dared to plead time was haunting} down among the ground, I wept my feelings deep -- Honor, bravery -- my brother remains, you will show me courage and strength hope -- bold as the rainbow, beautiful butterfly, raven in midnights passing We shall grow, walk the beach surrender to the dark-- new mountains we’ll build I am the future together we will stand begin again with love ~~~~~~~~~ Thank you Sunshine, for the inspiration of your "How I know him" /pip/Forum70/HTML/003735.html [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-12-2002 12:47 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Honor, bravery -- my brother remains, you will show me courage and strength hope -- bold as the rainbow, beautiful butterfly, raven in midnights passing We shall grow, walk the beach surrender to the dark-- new mountains we’ll build I am the future together we will stand begin again with love"   (big hugggsssssss) Oh Lauren, this is majestic, I love it, this gave me the vision of a fallen angel at first scarred with innocent tears of loves loss then how the angel rises like a phoenix and embraces loves glow once more with hope! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I always love reading your works as you always leave some of the most striking free-verse there is in here and you also give us a new look at things from as aspect of one that truely cares about the people and the things around her. In other words ... we learn and I for one appreciate that. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
a rare gift you've received, and one you obviously appreciate. your writing is growing, as you are, a treat. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
down among the ground, I wept my feelings deep -- Lauren,  I think that your feelings no matter how they are expressed are always 'deep'. You are deep of heart and soul, this piece shows how caring that heart and soul is. Well done lady.. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lauren ... the flow in this piece is simply exquisite, and the sentiments are phrased in splendid fashion. I was very moved in reading this ... beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Reflections there was no rain, tears there was no dawn, dusk a reunion of survival -- autumns, now of colorful leaves {and I cried for you} You fell so fast from grace your innocent smile hiding tears of fear ====================================== the love for him and the compassion for his losses rise above your own pain and losses... and speak volumes to the dedication and the ties that bind that no one can take away. Beautiful write of heart Poetess L If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely exquisite...the poem and the writer! ~Hugs~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What an inspired piece Thank you, Green-eyed lady Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well written poetry full of things to ponder - loved it - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, I agree with all of the above. |
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mestesa78 Junior Member
since 2002-08-12
Posts 24 |
Love is a battle all will fight, win, and loose. A never ending circle till the cirlce comes to an end and we no longer must fight. Then and only then will love be true |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
neat write |
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JAR Junior Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 34 |
Yes I know he will recall many memories to share in place of silence for over 30 years I too adore your heart J' |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you really mean to make me tear up? I am sorry I did not see this until just today, or I would have said then what I am saying now... thank you... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lauren How lovely to see you back gracing our pages with your beautiful, heartfelt words. I am hoping that you are alright. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
We shall grow, walk the beach surrender to the dark-- new mountains we’ll build I am the future together we will stand begin again I am so happy for you, Lauren... Its wonderful that you found your siblings again... I wonder if any of them write poetry?  ~ hugs of new beginningsLyra |
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