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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-11 11:55 PM




I'm lost and alone
could you please
take me home?"

"Yes I will
and forever
love you still."

"Then you'll always
hold me close
but not capture?"

"I'll hold you
near to me
and enrapture."

"Can I stay
with you love
until I die?"

"Yes my love
it's forever
you and I."

WhiteRose


In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-08-12 12:24 PM


Oh how very sweet, Anne...
It gave me a warm fuzzy chipmunk feeling.
~ warm fuzzy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-08-12 12:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love how this flows like a conversation between two destined lovers, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, may you and your love always be together in eternal joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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