Just a little something..for ShadowRider

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Open Poetry #21

Just a little something..for ShadowRider

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-11 05:03 PM

Sometimes I think I need to unfold
more slowly
and with greater efficiency
the writings of you.

Less cryptic perhaps then
your words might have the chance
to do the delicate dance
that you have penned
whilst your heart
came sneaking out onto the page.

Forgive me my impatience
I want your shadow
to be defined more clearly
that I might find shade
within it's darkness.

WhiteRose
(often confused)

[This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-11-2002 06:11 PM).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-08-11 05:52 PM

Fragile write , full of promise.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-08-11 06:35 PM

(smiles) Oh Anne, I agree, Jeff's words are remarkable and brilliant and always touch my heart with wisdom as yours also do! (kiss on cheek) I know he will be happy reading this dedication, sweet friend, I sure am, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

3 posted 2002-08-12 08:08 AM

Tis an honor, White Rose, and a form of embarassement for me, as well at times. The thoughts i transfer are not always clear. They would make sense if i explained the lines, but i am reluctant to define a singular conclusion since we all see different views of the same abstract painting. *smiling* My fault.....i am just way too inscrutable.

I thank you so, for your sweet poem, White Rose. Very much.....

Catch ya on the flip side!
jeff

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

4 posted 2002-08-12 10:30 AM

I often find myself asking him for explanation too! *LOL* He often asks me to read them before he posts them to get my reaction first and to see how complicated they are. So don't feel awkward, that is how he writes, and it is beautiful isn't it? I love the way he produces such rich images seemingly out of thin air! (you should have seen the blush when he read this beautiful dedication) but don't tell him I told you! hehehee...

Wonderfully written WR!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2002-08-12 10:47 AM

well written full of admiration and grace - nicely done white rose - Paul

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