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One Lonely Night
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One Lonely Night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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One Lonely Night Once upon a midnight thunder, Half asleep and mind in wonder. Charisma paint the night in rain, Rivulets on my window pane. Pirouettes fell the dark of sky, Plump and pure in crystals fly. Flamboyant in a winds display, As graceful as a played ballet. Ancient oceans lifted waters, Played upon an earthly daughter. Hypnotic patters wheel in grace, Covered the land, mantilla lace. Symphonic notes in bristly wonder. Magic strikes of light and thunder Mingled in my minds refrain. And purged it with the clean of rain. And half a smile lit my face. As blanket warmth held me in place. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Soft I plinked the melody Of night’s refrain and you, and me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Sy!! Enjoyed so much with my tea this early Sunday. ~Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, it is quiet here...cool, with barely a breeze...yet I feel the patter of rain upon my mind's roof....and smell the freshness of the cleansed air...through your words... Good Morning... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are a love.  Enchantress, Good morning dear and may you have the best of days. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good Morning Mangus, A good day to you and a pleasant evening. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Charisma paint the night in rain, Rivulets on my window pane. Pirouettes fell the dark of sky, Plump and pure in crystals fly. Flamboyant in a winds display, As graceful as a played ballet. Ancient oceans lifted waters, Played upon an earthly daughter. Hypnotic patters wheel in grace, Covered the land, mantilla lace. Symphonic notes in bristly wonder. Magic strikes of light and thunder ===================================== My master artist of imagery...this is the reason for poetry...How lovely is this... Pirouettes fell the dark of sky, Plump and pure in crystals fly. How poetically pretty. You are as consistantly impressive in your verse as is the rain. Thru an artists and poets eye you give us the view of you in rhymed hue. Ancient oceans lifted waters, Played upon an earthly daughter. Hypnotic patters wheel in grace, Covered the land, mantilla lace. and how cool can one verse be anyway  Ancient oceans lifted waters that line alone is worth its weight in poetic gold... but then so it the poet that wrote it. Beautiful write of rain on the pane Stinkylove. *ww*   If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, If the poem is pleasing your comments are even more pleasing. All you write is a delight and makes my day a butterflies flight And Randy winks at me to fly and spend a wile with you this day. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You make delightful fall around me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, The delight is mine. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Oh... how I wish English was my native language... to know all these words... a beautiful poem Seymour!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja You do very well. And thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Symphonic notes in bristly wonder. Magic strikes of light and thunder Mingled in my minds refrain. And purged it with the clean of rain. I love thunderstorms, Sy... and you orchestrated this one beautifully.  ~ hugs from chipmunk trying to steal your thunderLyra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed your words and rhyme ..it begged to be read aloud *s M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Ancient oceans lifted waters, Played upon an earthly daughter. Hypnotic patters wheel in grace, Covered the land, mantilla lace.' I ALWAYS read you aloud ... and this is a beautiful exercise for everyone to follow~ Your thoughts roll off my tongue as easily as they drip from your quill~ You ARE September's poet-of-choice~ And you'll do any other month (Tee-Hee ... almost said 'moth') of the year too~  Love you fair poet~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful with a soft yearning, I love it! (smiles) I understand how you feel because I yearn for my sweetheart Joanna so much and I cry missing her before bed yet in my dreams the blanket almost makes me feel her gentle touch! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, remember the old it was a dark and stormy night stories you had to write for English expression? Well I just had a vivid memory with your work of beauty. IWIHWT Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, You can steal my thunder any time. Maureen, Thank you my dear. Marge, You have a big heart and a wonderful sense of humor. Noah, Thank you my friend. Keth, Thank you my dear, enjoyed. NOAH, |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, This is lovely, so glad I came for a peek. Love, Cerenity |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Where have you been, I missed you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not only do I envy your poetic talent, I must envy you your blanket! LOL I had to crawl out and come to work through such a storm... and believe me, I'd rather read about it! LOL This is superb, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, Love your bright rain coat. You are a love. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderfully lilting with a cozy message. There really is comfort in a gentle rain and a warm blanket. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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